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Past Sins: Luna vs. Nightmare Moon by PercyTailsOreos Past Sins: Luna vs. Nightmare Moon by PercyTailsOreos
So, whilst doing something to pass the time, I stumbled across a My Little Pony fanfiction called Past Sins. I wo'nt say what it's about but this should give you a clue. ;)
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MorphiusX Featured By Owner May 23, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
And talk about a time lapse to cut what really happened between that battle, even if we know about Luna's fate.
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MechaKnucklesA3 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This reminds me of Siegfried and Nightmare from Soul Calibur.
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TaionaFan369 Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
this was unexcpected
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PercyTailsOreos Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Student Digital Artist
why?
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TaionaFan369 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I never expected to find a brony/thomas/rail fan to stumble across the story, let alone create fanart
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PercyTailsOreos Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Student Digital Artist
sorry, but im not a pegasister, which is what you'd call a female brony. :)
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TaionaFan369 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Let me rewrite

I never expected to find a thomas/rail fan to stumble across the story, let alone create fanart
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trainboy656 Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012
I'm going to take a shot in the dark and say that this is the battle that took place within Luna's mind as herself and her anguish fought for control.
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Dancewithknives Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013
(Long inhale) Past Sins is an incredibly famout-and also overrated- story by Penstroke centering around a cult lead by one of Celestia's traitorous trusted advisors who is brainwashed into trying to resurect Nightmare Moon. the ritual is interupted and and the byproduct is a alicorn filly, who when Twilight finds and adopts, is now known as Nyx even though she can easily tell its Nightmare moon, sans the evil.
Fast forward a month, and Nyx does 1001 cutesy "Daww" moments that are WAY too forced and get old quick being that she is crying most of the time or is "Boo hoo pitty me". Meanwhile Celestia is aware of Nyx's existance and plans to see if it really is NMM in disguise (In the original edit, Celestia planned to murder Nyx). Now, Celestia is fooled again, and the ritual is completed, turning Nyx into Full nightmare moon except with a bipolar disorder. She has an army of followers, and sneaks into the castle, Defeats both Luna and Celestia in an incredibly OP mary sue and patheticly stupid way and banishes them to their heavenly bodies. Following that she rules the world and... does nothing... except cry for 100,000 words and wonders why no one likes her.
Blah blah blah, We figure out that the traitor and his cult followers are all brainwashed, so its not thier fault, Nyx purges the infestation and lets them all go hom... to which she does nothing.....
Later, monsters attack ponyvile, and Nyx decides to forget that she is OP and almost dies rescuing all the civilians. Celestia and Luna are released, and Nyx has her power taken away, returning to being a filly, and otherwise is let go without any punishment... even though she ruined millions in property damage... and endangered at least a couple hundred people directly... and performed an act that is punishable by death....

Anyway, im with the growing faction that of people who see past the "Daww" charade and see that, if not being Nightmare Moon, Nyx would have been an average OP alicorn Mary Sue, who is only saved by penstrokes writing and worldbuilding, even though he repeats himself several times throughout the story.

There have been a few expansion, but all suck being that it is rehashing "No one likes/ trusts me because i am Nightmare moon" and "Pitty me."
Also, Penstroke has edited the story about 4 times and re released it sometimes changeing only a sentance or a few paragraphs.

And that is past sins, minus 26 chapters.
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PercyTailsOreos Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012  Student Digital Artist
close, but not quite - i'd say you're halfway there. ^^
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